Valentine

Falling apart
Don't know
Where to start
Don't wanna let go
You keep telling me no
But I can't give up now
Have I wasted a year
I have I wasted my time
With every last tear
Please don't do this to me
Please just give me a chance
I only want you
I want love and romance
I won't break you
I care and I'm sorry
That at the mall
Everyone stared
But you just don't see
What I feel inside me
Then you'd understand
Why they stare...
You're perfect from
Your clothes to
Your hair and your
Attitude is so damn sexy
Perplexing me in everything
That you do or say
I hope you never go away
I know one day you'll understand
And on that day you'll be mine
My sweet valentine
© 2004


wow ok I hate this one

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aw! dont be upset!!! dont get mad, get GLAD!!!

xOx Krista Marie
Posted 7/31/2004 1:15 PM by Oo_Rox_Ur_Sox_oO


I love the music on your site Trapt is a pretty good band.. and I like your poetry.
Posted 7/31/2004 2:14 PM by BrokenEmpathetic


hey i liked the poem except the ending cuz i know she will never be mine...but other wise i liked it
Posted 8/8/2004 2:47 AM by So_in_Love_with_HER

Moshi-Moshi

No one told him
I'm not breathing
And now I know
I'm not sleeping
In your mind
I gave you
Someone to talk to
I lied so you
Could hide but
Please don't cry
Smile and don't
Believe
Wake me
From this dream
I'm all that's left
Of yesterday
© 2004

Untitled X

I like the way
My body quakes
To the beat
Of your heart

I like the way
The rain begins
To fall down
When I start

To fall down
On my knees
Crawling
In your skin
© 2004

PAST COMMENTS

Well I dunno, you could leave it just like that, nice and simple. But unfinished or no, it's already beautiful. I'll remember to come back here often...
Posted 7/30/2004 3:10 AM by Beautiful_Loser7

Untitled IX

Blood is red and I feel blue
You stole my heart and broke it too
You sold my soul and left me here
And all that's left is angst and tears

© 2004

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that hit...right at the soft spot..

~ray
Posted 7/26/2004 8:52 PM by Monkeydiver07

theres no reason left to fight.

the battle is lost.

no more everyday .

this is at an ending and im through with you.
Posted 7/26/2004 9:50 PM by spinmeista_flex

omigosh did you write that? thats an awesome poem

Posted 7/28/2004 6:45 PM by foreverlonely76

Nice pics.. and kick ass song.. Trapt.. Still Frame.. Nice!! aight l8erz
Posted 7/29/2004 4:49 AM by DaRk_pHyTo

Love the pics. hey and my new site is Pretty_In_Black950, I won't be using Hikari nemore, so yea. Hope ta talk to ya soon!
~S~
Posted 7/29/2004 7:17 PM by anonymous

Untitled VIII

I'm on my knee's
And begging please
Can't you just
Give me a chance

I'm on my knee's
And begging please
And you won't even
Take a glance

(Not finished)
© 2004

Untitled VII

Shakin ass and
Movin fast
Holdin hips and
Lockin lips
Bodies bumpin
Music pumpin
We're all ravin
And I'm cravin
Slowly grindin
Thoughts in mind and
There's no tears
No time for moppin
Everyone's here
And we're all groppin
The punch was spiked
And now we're hyped
Intoxicated
Shoulda waited
But oh well
The parties swell
I had a drink
When I was done
Off came my top
Then came some fun
And then as I
Began to flirt
Well funny thing
Up went my skirt
I'm proud of two
Things we did right
We used protection
On that night
We took a cab and
Stayed alive
Remembering not
To drink and drive

© 2004

The Things You Do

You haunt me
You taunt me
You flaunt what
You've got...

Cause you tease me
You please me
Though not very
Often although
When you soften
Your touch and
You do this at
School and they
All think you're
Cool though you
Treat me unfairly
And though I am
Weary I seem to
Not care though
You make me look
Easy and everyone
Stares...

But I love you
There's no one
Above you
Making me whole
And freeing my
Soul and you don't
Understand and they
Don't see just
How much you mean
To me...
© 2004

Untitled VI

I know one day
That when I'm gone
You'll find another slave

I know one day
You'll set me free
And send me to my grave
(Not finished)

© 2004

Sextra! Sextra!

Lust
Trust
Thrust
Thrust
In, out
Up, down
Mmmmmmmmm
Still a virgin
Not so young
By the taste
Of a virgin tongue
Three more years
But will you last
Can you take it
Not too fast
This may hurt you
Yes I know
Come on baby
Oooo let's go
Kiss me here and
Touch me there
Then take off
My underwear
Gropping
Kissing
Add some tounge
Oh my god
I'm gonna come
My first time
Has not come yet
But what you see
Is what you get
And in the end
I hope I don't
Regret it
© 2004

Healing

I need to heal
From how I feel
I feel like screaming
Awaken from this
Dream gone nightmare
I stare into the darkness
I hear you calling
Is it any wonder
I can't sleep
As I think about you
I begin to weep
As you slowly seep
Into my haunted realm
© 2004


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Love the new layout thingy, and absolutely love the poems!!!!!!!!!!! Triple times...like....1000x lol. And I love ur background..newayz gots ta go, just wanted u to kno that I love it! and ta keep writing!

~Stac~
Posted 7/21/2004 9:33 PM by Hikari_Angel950


love the poems, theyre good

xOx Krista Marie
Posted 7/21/2004 11:45 PM by Oo_Rox_Ur_Sox_oO


Very good once agian :)
Posted 7/23/2004 10:05 AM by XMidnightxAshesX


**disclaimer**

8:10 in the p.m. i murder you for being the annoying fuck you are. HA HA HA HA. bloody messes of raptured flesh splayed on my face SPIRITS RISING. Consumate hatred putrid insolence annoyance you're my living sacrifice. Let the demons take hold and rape your face I'll take control. This manifest of paranormal occult actions. Most heinous sex acts , I go down HEAR YOUR SCREAMS i arise looking new born , razors edge pressed against your bloody cunt 3 slices and your life is flowing in my veins. I came from a bloody engorged bloody hole and thats where I'll bury you. rip you in half and place you upon the altar intestines spilling over... DRIP...DRIP...DROP bloody organ slop.... SPIRITS RISING
Posted 7/23/2004 2:40 PM by spinmeista_flex

Just This Once

You make me
But please just
Don't break me
When I trusted
You just don't
See that she's
Nothing like
Me though I
Give you my
Heart you just
Tear it apart
And you keep
Choosing her
She gives your
Heart a stir
With a blender
And then I'm
There for you
Again you don't
See won't you
Look
Look at me
Just this once...
And there's nothing
That I can do...

Even without a heart...
I'm still in love with you...
© 2004

Higure

Tonight
Tonight I pray
Pray that you stay
You stay with me
With me tonight
Because tonight
Tonight I bleed
I bleed and breath
Breath one last breath
With that last breath
I want to say
Say that I love you
In everyway
And as I take
That final Breath
In your arms
I lay to rest
© 2004

Simplify

Dying
Praying
Bleeding
Screaming
Forsaken
In your eyes
Thoughts
Heart
Trust me
In my
Self-rightous
Suicide
© 2004

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heyy kiara its julia upfal from art
Posted 7/18/2004 11:52 AM by doin_time

Your poetry is really really good. And you have a nice site too. I didnt read all of them just the ones on the front page. You should publish a book with them. They are really good.

~Ashley~

Posted 7/18/2004 1:06 PM by XMidnightxAshesX

My Problem

Circulation cut off
I
Can't
Breath
It's happening again
You
Don't
See
I can't do anything right
What's wrong
With
Me
I'm suffering tonight
© 2004

A Twisted Preposal

Wasting my time
In this place of horror
Waiting to die and go to hell.
Looking for ways
To cure my disorder
There is no hope that I can tell

Someday you'll find
Me and you'll see
The monster that dwells within
Someday you will
Realize that it's time
For an eternal chapter to begin

You'll understand
That who I am is not
Just a girl who loves you
You'll see that I'm
Caring and grateful
And my love is eternally true

I'm faithful and
I know that you need
Someone that causes no grief
I'm Loyal I'll be
There by your side
And I know I can give you relief

Free me and I will
Be yours for all time
I know you were born to release me
I'll never hurt you
And never desert you
All you have to do is believe me
© 2004



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"My love she speaks like silence
Without ideals or violence
She doesn't have to say she's faithful
Yet she's true, like ice, like fire
People carry roses
And make promises by the hours
My love she laughs like the flowers
Valentines can't buy her.

In the dime stores and bus stations
People talk of situations
Read books, repeat quotations
Draw conclusions on the wall
Some speak of the future
My love she speaks softly
She knows there's no success like failure
And that failure's no succes at all.

The cloak and dagger dangles
Madams light the candles
In ceremonies of the horsemen
Even the pawn must hold a grudge
Statues made of match sticks
Crumble into one another
My love winks, she does not bother
She knows too much to argue or to judge.

The bridge at midnight trembles
The country doctor rambles
Bankers' nieces seek perfection
Expecting all the gifts that wise men bring
The wind howls like a hammer
The night blows rainy
My love she's like some raven
At my window with a broken wing."
- Bob Dylan

Posted 7/17/2004 10:47 PM by PhreakyMusicHead

That's one of my favorite love songs.
Posted 7/17/2004 10:56 PM by PhreakyMusicHead

that sounds like a great offer... altho it makes me weary. like the words of a demon. filled with promises and love. but backed with betrayal and hatred.
Posted 7/18/2004 1:53 AM by holyfreekinspandexbatman

hey was lookin through blogrings and urs caught my eye when i read that little discription thingy i know how u feel i think becuz thats exactly how i feel...
Posted 7/18/2004 4:39 AM by So_in_Love_with_HER

An Attempt To Remember

Fuckin chorus (below)


I wanna be your number one
I wanna be your shining sun
I wanna be your everything
I wanna make your heart sing

I'll brighten up your cloudy day's
I wanna take your pain away
I wanna be your everything
'Cause you're everything to me


I'm starting to remember one of the poems......

I Dream
I Scream
I Smile
I Weep
I Haunt
I Taunt
I Break
I Ache
I Love
Because
I LIVE



I think I remember the beginning of another one..............

I'm slowly drifting away
There's nothing left to do or say
Sometimes I wanna runaway
Sumthin

Blah
Blah
Yada
Yada

I dunno damnit


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hey, thanks for the comment...wait what grade are u gonna be in? I'm gonna be a sophomore...ewww thats weird..i liked being a dumb freshman hehe.

c ya round'

~ray
Posted 7/16/2004 11:17 PM by Monkeydiver07


This is not directed towards you, I come and randomly post on sites my poetry. If you like it, and theres more than just depressing poems trust me, then subscribe. You should recieve a poem just about every other day. Thank you, enjoy.

how can one thing so pure be tragically broken

necks are once so subtle i can only wait to snap

why are you still here

you cant take the hint

i loved you once but not anymore

i despise the existance of you

freed now of any infatuation.

free to go and kill everything that once might have been

the ring extended to you was dashed away with out a word

given up hope, life, lust, peace, pride

just to make you happy

now go kill yourself because you dont get what you want

just kill yourself.. but your to weak to go through with it.

you wish you were worthy

and my chauvinistic ways bleed through again. and i spite you for what youve brought upon yourself,

i know youll read this and think that im the asshole

but fuck you and all your worth for you cant know the hell im in

just call leave a message of hate

truth lies in the emptyness of the vodka

it was all i could do to keep from killing your ignorance.

play along and hope you pick up the pace

you were always disgusted

i hope that i kill every feeling that you once had inside.

because my heart shaped box is full of tears and needs none of yours
Posted 7/17/2004 8:21 AM by spinmeista_flex

ANGER

I wrote like 3 or 4 poems last night but i fuckin didn't save them and my dad is a fuckin asshole and doesn't EVER respect my privacy and then had the nerve to lie and say he wasn't in my room so when i ask him to do me a fav and save them he says he turned the comp off and i said he said he wasn't in my room and he said he was he shoulda fuckin said that in the first fuckin place!

It's burning inside and
I don't wanna hide it
I'm tired of all of this
Bullshit I'm done
Losing 4 peices
To my soul now
How the fuck
Can I ever be whole
© 2004

All I fuckin remember is a chorus I fuckin made up thinkin maybe one day i'll write a song but I don't even really care about that so much like not at all it wasn't very important not as important as b4 asshole fuckin ass hole I hate him right now he needs to stay out of my life he should trust me enough I don't do nething wrong just leave me the fuck ALONE!

Shiika

Poetry lost
And poetry broken
Always poetic
However soft spoken

A poet in life
And a poet in death
This is my story
And there's alot left

Poetry lost
And poetry broken
Always poetic
No matter how spoken
© 2004

Demon's Promise

Did she break your heart
I knew from the start
That she's not the one
Though she might have been fun
But don't you want
Someone who haunts
You in your dreams
And makes you scream
But not in fear
To shed a tear
Oh no not me
I love you dear
I won't break your heart
Tell you from the start
That I am the one
And I'll still be fun
But you don't want
Someone who haunts
You in your dreams
And makes you scream
But don't you see
That you need me
© 2004

Untitled V

BREAK
Break
Break
Break

I need you
I love you
And she
Doesn't
Love you
Like I do
And I know
That she told
You she does

Break
Then bind
Break
Then bind

Break from her
Take from her
Bind to me
Find in me
What you need
What you seek
Am I making
You weak in
The knees

Bind
Bind
Bind
BIND
© 2004

Dream A Dream

I'm holding onto
A dream that
Wont come true...
A dream that
Someday
I'll belong to you
© 2004

Well 5 days away from their 2 month Anniversary... and they fuckin broke up! What the hell! It makes no sense really.... oh well I hope he's ok she broke up with him after all.... I'm sorry.... I hope you're ok....

WANTED

A smart guy, that's outgoing... caring... great sense of humor... knows how to be silly but knows when to be serious... Who loves me for me... who doesn't play mind games... who's honest... and loyal... just don't break my heart... it's barely holding together with the super glue...

When you care
About someone
As much as I do you
Being apart
Is the hardest thing
To get used to
I thought
I'd handle it just fine
And that I'd be happy
Just to keep you
On my mind
But it isn't always that easy
Sometimes the one thing
That would please me
The most
Is simply seeing you
I knew that I'd miss you
I just didn't know
I'd miss you this much...
© 2004

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Well, I think there are only 5 men that meet ur qualifications lol. I mean...man all of them are dumb. But I love guys soo much lol I can't help it. Newayz luv ur poem!

~Stac~
Posted 7/14/2004 5:08 PM by Hikari_Angel950

A Lonely Walker

I feel so broken up...
And I give up...
Lie to me...
Just once more
Give me something
Worth living for
You don't love me
Like I love you
Say you hate me
So I can move on
Tell me something
A reason
Worth fighting for
Give me anything
Anything to keep me breathing
I can't just walk away
Pretending I don't love you....
That night I held a fallen star
And it wept for me...dying...
And now tonight I am the star
So hold me as I die I cry
Cause I like the way
You make me feel
And atleast I'll die happy
© 2004

Innocent Until Proven Guilty

It might not go with this picture but whatever

I'm breaking
I'm aching
I want this
To end
I've been so
Damn open
It's time to
Defend
This damn
Four leaf clover
Is usless
And well
All though I
Just found it
I already fell
Into the abyss
On my way
Down to hell
Fell in love
I fell hard
How could I
Know you sucked
You ruined my life
I'm now totally
Fucked
And yet still
I love you
Innocent though
So filthy
From lies now
You die I'm
Still not
Proven guilty
© 2004

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WOw I love all your poems, and kewl pic on the last entry, she look innocent, yet when you scroll down and see the blood drenched sword and gaze upon the sea of blood she's rising on then you know that she's done sumthing bad. Sorry I love deciphering pictures. newayz I love your writing, and you back ground is kinda scary but in a kewl way lol. Love the pic Innocent Until Proven Guilty, but I bet that lil penguin dude is just a lil guilty, lol. Oh and I love the back ground music, who is it? J/w. Well gots ta go comment on oblivious peoples xangas that I don't even kno lol. Well hope ta tlak to ya soon, beh bi!

~Stac~
Posted 7/13/2004 11:26 PM by Hikari_Angel950

I love that penguin pic, but I can't see it anymore. Where you get it?
Posted 7/14/2004 12:05 AM by Indulge_Yourself_Mindlessly

Just wait...

Turn on your light...
And they'll see you...
You make a sound...
And they'll hear you...
If you think its scary being lost...
Just wait until you're found.

But then
That's what you want
Isn't it don't you need
Someone to notice you
To care for and treasure
Only you forever

Turn on your light...
And they'll see you...
You make a sound...
And they'll hear you...
If you think its scary being lost...
Just wait until you're found.

But then
What if it's not
What you thought
They could hurt you
Desert you and then
What would you do

Turn on your light...
And they'll see you...
You make a sound...
And they'll hear you...
If you think its scary being lost...
Just wait until you're found.

But then
They could use you
Abuse you and then
They'd erase your memory
And do it again
But what could you do
Yes what to do then

So turn on your light...
And they'll see you...
So just make a sound...
And they'll hear you...
'Cause if you think its scary being lost...
Just wait until you're found.
© 2004

Remedy

I need you
I want you
But no you're
Not here
I want you
I need you
To help cure
This fear
© 2004

Even Unto Death

4:50 AM Bye bye baby
Don't be long
I worry about you
While you're gone
And if I die
Upone your wake
I pray my heart and soul
You take
And bury me
In the garden
Prove to me love
With tender care
That even in hell
Your love is still there
© 2004

Pattern of the Stars

I love you
My only one
Just as the moon
Does love the sun
But the sun
Loves not the Moon
The Universe goes
Round the Sun itself
While the Moon
Does circle the Earth
But the moon
Loves the sun
The only one
And it's love is all
It's worth
© 2004

Hitori Dake

I am so alone in this world
No one to wipe tears from my eyes
No one to hear my cries
No one to ease the pain
No one to make me sane
No one to explore my haunted reality
No one to know the real me
No one to understand
No one to take my hand
No one to guide me away from here
No one to take away my fear
No one to share my love
No one that's thinking of
No one to care for me
No one not too blind to see
That I'm as alone as can be
© 2004

Games of the Stars

You thought it was over
It's just begun
Just as the moon
And rising sun
Are in a constant
Game of tag
A war of sorts
That's quite gone bad
For when the sun
Does greet the the day
The moon has scowled
And gone away
And when the moon
Does chase the sun
The sun with day
Is gone and done
And so this game
Has gone to waste
As has my love
For you in haste
From Toxic Faith
Comes Toxic Fate
Thus is my Love
Against your Hate
© 2004

Endless Waltz

Broken pieces
Rotten core
You tore my heart
To peices four
You said it true
I had a chance
Well now it's over
And this dance
This endless waltz
Inside my chest
Just like my soul
Will finally rest
© 2004

Unrequited Love (8:30ish PM)

As the tears seep
Into a new wound
As I drink away my pain
The sting of the salt
In my liquid sorrow
Reminds me of
The love I have for you
And the love not yet returned...
Not yet...
© 2004

Remember

I do remember
That night with you
I remember I drank
Of crimson dew
From a pouring rain
Filled with
The crimson tears
Of a life time
And as we drank
I rememberd
Things unfelt
No not unfelt
For I felt them
And for just one night
I thought you
Felt them too
© 2004

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wow... another nice one! well, just checkin up on u.. ehehehe props gurl!...
Posted 7/11/2004 11:06 AM by romeo_n_juliet_aznstyle - delete - block user - fix language - reply


wow, that's really good :)
Posted 7/11/2004 11:30 AM by qhetto_PiNK


Hey, i was checking out some random blogs and i came across your site. your poetry kicks ass. Random Props. Byes.

~Maria~
Posted 7/11/2004 12:54 PM by XxS666NxX


Mad Propz..im keepin my xanga yo...danx..lata
Posted 7/11/2004 5:02 PM by chinezekid916

Untitled IV

Sorrow feeds
Off haunted dreams
As I follow
The crimson road
Of hope and desire
© 2004

Exist

Do I still exist
In your mind
Or have I
Wasted away

Am I just
Another face
Or am I
Here to stay

Will I ever exist
In your heart
Or shall I
Fade away

Will I ever
Hear those words
I've longed
For you to say

I want you to know
That you still exist
In my mind
Heart and soul

I want you to know
As I steal this kiss
That I'll never
Let you go
© 2004

Untitled III

A crimson being
With broken wings
Haunts me in my
Twisted dreams
Broken heart
And empty soul
My thoughts alone
Don't make me whole
© 2004

MP

You think
I think
Too much of thee
You think
That I
Refuse to see
What lies
Behind the mask
But I
Do see what hides
Behind closed eyes
But you
Don't see
And so you say
Good day to thee
And then away
And as I cry
I pray thee stay
You smile and nod
And go your way
And as my cries
Fall on deaf ears
My cries then
Slowly
Turn to tears
These tears
I've cried
For many years
© 2004

Cold but Honest ~ Sad but True

Cold but Honest
Sad but True
You don't
Love me now
Though I
Still love you
You miss me
You diss me
You want to
Be with me
And sometimes
You piss me
Off

Cold but Honest
Sad but True
You know how
I feel but
Do you
Feel it too
© 2004

PAST COMMENT
I really like this one alot. You did a great job as usual! Keep up the great work :)
Posted 7/10/2004 2:58 AM by x0xSinfulxMamiix0x

Poetry at it's Best

Talking with you
Is poetry at it's best
It flows out freely
Without thought
© 2004

PAST COMMENTS
never mind...lol
Posted 7/9/2004 10:38 AM by darkspirt2588

Cute! :)
*smiles*
Posted 7/9/2004 2:55 PM by erotic_death

What You Ask For

Faithless but Faithful
Yet worthless to you
Why am I like this
Why is this true

Am I no different
Than anyone else
Am I not important
Do I mean nothing
Am I just another face
Just another girl
Who likes you for whatever reason
Do you not feel the need
To ease the greatest pain
Dry my tears and except my heart
Or shall you break it
For the 3rd time

It's ok
I'm not dead
Yet

Same goes for those
Who souls are shattered
Broken hearts and toxic faith
Have consumed them
Then all the words
I ever spoke and sung
Will sink in
And you'll kiss
Cold lips goodbye
Teardrops
Warm and salty from your eyes
Take my love to bed
And lay down your head
I shall watch over you
Dear sweet love of mine
© 2004

PAST COMMENTS

nice xanga!
Posted 7/9/2004 1:51 AM by foreverlonely76

A Shower of You

I like the way The water feels
On my skin nice and warm
As it caresses every inch, Every curve
As I wish you would
And the scented lather
All over so soft, sweet
Like your hands
Like your touch
A shower of you
You rain down on my heart
My body my soul
I'm getting restless
Ten minutes to A half hour
I might get lost
In my shower of you
© 2004

PAST COMMENT
wow your pretty good!
Posted 7/8/2004 5:33 PM by darkspirt2588

hey again...lol...just wondering..what are the eprops for n.e.way? : D
Posted 7/8/2004 7:17 PM by darkspirt2588

Unwanted

Faded, jaded, alone, and confused.
Belated, I waited. So lost and abused.
Dream with the fallen angels of hope.
I'll try feeling special. I'll try hard to cope.
But I just feel... Unwanted, Unneeded, Unloved.

You are wanted
And thats all the same
So smile

I am wanted by whom but the darkness
That consumes my very heart and soul
Seeps into the mind and swallows me whole
I've been dead until now
There is a new song in the stars tonight
Crimson Poetry...
Drink from the dew drops of a pouring rain
As tears from my eyes do fall
So do the stars from the sky
And so do I fall in love with you again
© 2004

Daddy's Drinking Again

Daddy's drinking again
As I'm thinking again
Slowly sinking again
What did I do this time

Daddy's coming
Daddy's humming
Drunkin tunes
From the eighty's

Daddy's raising his hand
As this happens again
As I try to defend
Tell me when will this end

Morning has come
And the sun
Is shining in my window
And all seems well

Daddy's sober again
As I'm thinking again
I'm still sinking again
'Cause wait 'til tonight
© 2004

Me and My Dad

I got in it bad With my dad...
This drinking thing Makes me so sad...
Were is all the love That we had...
That was shared Between me and my dad...
When morning comes Sober is dad...
When morning comes Then I'll be glad...
Then there will be love To be had...
A love between me And me dad...
© 2004

Kimmi dear I love you... you are beautiful...... plz kno this you are so beautiful... plz don't cry anymore.... why do such angels suffer... where is god now...... does he not see all..... can he not help us..... plz god help her.... if you really are thre plz jut help her.... i'm deffinetly not a very religious person i know but please.... please...... anyone who goes through this kno that it's not your fault.... i love u all... plz... plz don't cry anymore......


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Wow... that's a neat poem. Was browsing through and found your page. You're good. Keep it up.
Posted 7/6/2004 3:11 PM by secrets_unfolded

You Get What You Deserve

This pain inside is too much
This time I'll just let the tears fall
I long for your tender touch
As my fist pounds into the wall
And as I think about it
My insides begin to crawl

Blood drips from a crippled grip
As I fall to my knees
I find myself screaming, begging
God please just kill me, let me Die

I don't want to cry anymore
I don't want to hurt
I know they say that life's not fair
But is this my just deserts?
© 2004

Poetry

Poetry
When someone gives their heart to the world
Poetry
When someone free's their soul and sings
Poetry
When someone exposes their Mind, Body, and Soul for all to see
Poetry
When someone finally learns to fly
Poetry
© 2004

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wow, I really like that poem=)!! poetry is so powerful to read! well that is what I think... Ashley K
Posted 7/5/2004 3:28 PM by mysticeyes747

Wow that was beautiful. Is it your own? Assuming it is, you're very talented. Don't waste it.
Thanks for the subscription, and keep writing.

xoxo
HeatherPosted 7/5/2004 5:58 PM by erotic_death

Untitled II

I breathe a thousand breaths
And I cry a thousand tears
I don't know how long I can wait
For years upon years
You drive me up a wall
And I don't know what to do
All I know is somehow
Someday I've got to be with you
© 2004

Where were you

I fall
But are you ever there
To catch me

I cry
But are you ever there
To dry my eyes

I wonder
But are you ever there
To clear my thoughts

I see
But are you ever there
To guide me


I speak
But are you ever there
To listen

I listen
But are you ever there
To whisper

If I die
Will you be there
To mourn

I was always there
Where were you
© 2004

Untitled I

Break then bind from her to me
My love is eternal you and I become we
Forever together 'til death do we part
I bestow upon you the key to my heart
Unlock it and see what's inside
From you I have nothing to hide
© 2004

The Voices Inside

You think you can take an eternity...
But who said that I'd wait that long?
Do you think you'll ruin my purity?
You never cared all along...
The voices inside seem to like you
I think that you know this is true
But what do they say about me?
They, the voices locked inside of you
© 2004

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i like that poem
Posted 7/3/2004 4:15 PM by Wilted_Rose14

hey hun kool poem

grett
Posted 7/4/2004 11:59 AM by babytink06

I really like this one, keep up the awesome work!
Posted 7/4/2004 1:14 PM by x0xSinfulxMamiix0x

Dreamspace

I'll know it's you with crimson dew
On the dark wings of an angel forbidden
As this angel does so weep with crimson tears
Do I smile away the years
A new awakening...
But I do not enjoy my fate
.....Fifteen years.....
You missed my chest by inches with your sword
If you ask for help...
I will not but use the sword as my own
© 2004

What You Do

You're amazing...
You make me forget to breath
My heart stops...
Everytime you start to leave
My soul weeps...
As I moarn my love for you
© 2004

Rebirth

As I awaken from my crimson slumber
I shall remember
A dream of a kiss from the ashes
By the sunrise of our dying day
© 2004

The Otherside

Yes... Wishes do come true... If you're lucky...
You're here arn't you? Then maybe I am lucky...
I'm frozen with too many words
I'm melted by unwanted thoughts
Yin and yang, Good and evil
Light and dark, Sinner and saint
Who are you? Who am I?
You are you, I am me
We meet in between
For we are we
© 2004

What You Say

What you say
Is always with me
It appears everywhere I go
And yes I do smile
© 2004

Pieces Of Me

Don't break it, Don't lose it, Don't give it back
My heart... Keep it...
Don't sell it, Don't use it, Don't Keep it
My Soul... Set it free...
Don't use it, Don't abuse it, Don't harm it
My Body... Caress it...
Dry them as you cause them
My tears... Do you see them?
I send an illegal kiss to you despite the distance
Receive it...
Shall I steal it, Heal it, these wounds
Accept it...
© 2004

The Mix

If we shall not talk of life than what of death
And what of hope not yet lost
I still believe
Hope, Life, Dreams are pain
But I don't regret having them
Death will free me when its time
Though I do not wish it so
I do not welcome death
I will not welome death
I fear death
I'd rather suffer the pain of life
I've dreamed of such
To find true love and one day marry
Even round twenty
We know we feel it If it's true, Pure, and lasts forever
I will look upon awakening from the half life
I am but the age of fifteen though mistaken for nine
I'm gonna let it all just explode
It's Gonna feel so good. I know I told you before
I Gotta say it again 'Cause it feels so good
I love to see the look in your eyes as they grow wider
Know I've got your mind as my blood flows through your veins
I've felt this forever now you feel it too
© 2004

Thoughts Of Tomorrow

I didn't say he would or could
I didn't say at all
I have a feeling deep inside
Inside it makes me crawl
Knee deep in frustration
Doubting my faith
What would I do
Toxicity is great
He wouln't
I wouldn't
He couldn't
I couldn't
He shouldn't
I shouldn't
I WON'T
Will he?
© 2004

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nice poem really..^^

well today wAS FUN RIGHT.hehe well i hope your blister is okay...

talk to you later

*comment back

-joo young kwon
Posted 7/2/2004 12:40 AM by Joo108

The Edge of Temptation

My hands pray, My heart weeps
My eyes see through The lies you tell
My touch chills, My lips kill
My hips thrill, At your will
Your toxic kiss Puts me in bliss
I tease You please
Unseen scares Caress my soul
Unknown thoughts Will make me whole
I'm on fire, Do you want me
She's gone now And you haunt me
Don't do this I trust you Won't do this Or must you
Will I give I don't know But I can't Let this go
As thoughts flow Unfelt Passion Rising
It's on tonight Or is it
Will you be mine
Make me yours But not to fast
I want it To last
Unseen scares Caress my soul
But you Caress my body
So hold me, Kiss me, Touch me
You hold the key
You've captured My heart

Do you want me now? Good...
© 2004

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Your a really good poet. I am going to add you to my subs if thats ok.
Posted 7/1/2004 12:51 PM by x0xSinfulxMamiix0x

Thinkin' of You Before Nightfall

I've wasted away
I'll challange the day
I know I can't wait
To see you

I miss you
When I'm with you
I miss you
When you're gone

I know you're everywhere
In my dreams
My reality
You never leave

You're the one
You make me crazy
But I know
You want to erase me

It's not the same
For you
But I still have
My dreams

Goodnight love
© 2004

What Do You Do

What do you do
When the guy you love
Or think you love
Doesn't
Love
You

What do you do
When your world falls apart
And the tears don't stop
You
Feel
Blue

What do you do
When you know who I am
And you know that it's true
I
Love
You
© 2004

Blindsided

I'm broken...
I'm Lost...
I believe in you and I
And I will Until
The Day I die
I once could see...
Love Blinded me...
I often find
That I'm beginning
To lose my mind
© 2004

Toxic Faith

You make me sick
You're poison
Deadly.....
So kill these lips
With your toxic kiss

I believed in you
You sold my soul
You used my body
My heart...
You swallowed whole

You make me sick
Your poison
Deadly.....
I'd die again
With that toxic kiss
© 2004